Pool Party

One of my first mentors in art told me once, if you think you can improve something, don't love it so much that you can't throw it in the garbage for the sake of making it better.

So there you go - an improvement.

I spent 8 more hours on making this look better than it was. There's definitely a major improvement. Still stuff that can be done line zooming in and detailing characters methodically. 

I just don't feel like following through on that though. I've just more or less had enough of this piece and just want to let it go it's own way.

And yeah I guess I didn't really notice the whole thing alluding to hentai art until the last moment, so there ;)